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posted September 6th, 2013, 3:03 am


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September 6th, 2013, 3:21 am

BurstThrough

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Jezz when you describe having your legs bitten off and the pain of it and having to crawl with only your arms to not die it doesn't matter if it's a dream.
I hate her so much that I think Aida should go to her house only to drestroy her computer or erase it's memory(I think she'd have a heart attack being a game developer) and then she'd express something without mocking indifference.

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September 6th, 2013, 4:58 am

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@BurstThrough: Yeah, it must be really frustrating to convince the counterpart about your agony what happened in one's own head, especially if the others have no experience on their own of this phenomenon.

That sure would cause a fatal gap into their friendship. :'--D

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September 6th, 2013, 9:07 pm

LadyArrowsmith

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UGh. that's so frustrating that no one is taking her seriously. If she's scared, she's scared. Would it kill them to be a little nicer? Also, it might make more sense to say "She had a nightmare" rather than "saw a nightmare" since she experienced it rather than just watching it. :)

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September 7th, 2013, 3:42 am

Andressit

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@LadyArrowsmith: Oh gosh, thank you so much for all these comments of yours! It's really nice to get feedback. And thank you for pointing that out, I shall fix it right away :--)

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November 29th, 2013, 3:53 am

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@LadyArrowsmith: Not to be a douche, but english isn't his first language, but he is trying his best.

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