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posted November 1st, 2013, 3:41 am


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November 1st, 2013, 12:19 pm

BurstThrough

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I feel that he's in trouble but I'm relieved that she's stupid for grabbing a rich dude that can't get money unless he begs instead of one that can get the money he wants and only recieves complaints at the end of the month, makes me sure she'll either die in the begining of the story kinda like a first boss fight or she'll turn into a secondary character that dies along with someone more important than her.
But he's stupid if he thinks she'll leave him alone after getting what she wants she doesn't look like the grateful or rewarding kind.
He should either run away to another continent for 6 months and buy a gun for protection or buy a gun and try his luck against her.
Really liking this story I'm eager to see her having a painful and desperate death(kinda like the prologue but with yells of denial and much more pain).

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November 2nd, 2013, 5:20 am

Andressit

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@BurstThrough: Yup, even thought Marcel's father would denied to be in any kind of relationship with specific young lady I bet there would have been wealthy people who doesn't mind age disparity and what it does to their image if they get noticed.
To be honest I thought about doing few "first boss" like chapters and short arcs, but because the lack of my writing skills this might stretch a little, but now I'm not 100% sure about her fate anymore. Well, we'll see what happens..!
I'm glad to see that I've awoken such feelings with her character, haha :--D
Thanks for reading and dropping a comment!

@Meijing: The bad intensions shines through her character yet they've ended up in this situation :'--)

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June 26th, 2015, 6:30 pm

DraconicEmpress

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this is so not a healthy relationship. I Titanic it. (that's the OPPOSITE of shipping it. I just made it up.)

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