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posted March 30th, 2014, 1:21 pm


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March 30th, 2014, 1:21 pm

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Aida sure gets sharp-tongued when she is scared.

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March 30th, 2014, 1:45 pm

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Amazing artstyle and comic, but I think you put WAY too much text in your speechbubbles. It's really tiring to read. I used to do that as well though. But really, I love your artstyle so much! Keep it up. This is very professional looking.

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March 30th, 2014, 3:11 pm

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@spitfire-productions: Thank you for reading and having time to write this lovely feedback!
Yeah, I've been told so and I've re-drawn all the layouts complitely for the upcoming pages to make it easier to view. The resolution I draw is really low, so it would be a good solution to have less stuff on pages..!

But yeah, thank you again, I was really happy to get some comment! :--)

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March 30th, 2014, 3:14 pm

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@Andressit: Oh I am looking forward to seeing those pages! I'm pretty sure it'll look amazing. Don't be afraid to split a text bubble up in multiple ones. This also gives great opportunity to give the reader an indication of time in between the sentences. But yeah, it's best to let the art do most of the works. If you need lots of text to explain the story in a comic, you've already lost it. You may want to consider cutting some of the text if this is needed. :)

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April 4th, 2014, 12:55 pm

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Woah that is not what you wanna fall onto! XD
Ooh I wonder what will happen! :D

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